Monday, June 3, 2013

Final draft



Christopher Avalos
Professor Knapp
English 1A
3 June 2013
           
Dear Congress
Since the beginning of its founding, The United States of America (USA) has been proud to call itself a nation in which the state is separated from the church. The truth is that while many people believe it is a part of our constitution, the Bill Of Rights in fact, only guarantees that citizens have the freedom to practice whichever religion they choose for themselves (or what is chosen for them by parents, community, etc.) I know from firsthand experience that in every public school, children are taught to believe this idea. As a result, most adults believe this is true; however, the fact of the matter is that America is far from implementing these ideals. If I could change anything about today’s society, it would be to abolish all religious institutions’ influence on politics in the United States.
The fact that any form of discrimination can be ‘justified’ by a mere speculation has dumbfounded me. Yes, it may be hard to believe for someone who constantly discriminates others, but the truth is that no person has any more rights than the next. While it is true that some people do have more opportunity (when socioeconomic status is taken into account, unfortunately), it is my philosophy that everyone has natural rights as well as societal rights.
            As many people know, a very common form of discrimination in the world is sexism. This is no surprise, since the beginning of time women have never been thought of as equal counterparts to men. “Unto the woman he said, I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee.” (Bible, Genesis 3:16). If there were any further need to explain this, it would be wise to note that this is an obvious degradation to women, portraying them as nothing more than childbearing beings. While I blame no one for practicing their religion, I must say that not everyone has those same beliefs. Not every woman in the United States wants to be a homemaker with children running around all over the place. It is not fair that women working the same job for the same hours are being paid, on average, only 77% of what men are paid.
            The community of homosexuals in our nation is a thriving community. They are human beings just like everyone else and a preference should not make them deserve any less rights than the rest of us. I often hear people argue that their religion does not agree with the choices a homosexual might make. It simply does not make sense that one person’s beliefs would have the right to constitute what someone else’s personal choices might be. Why would someone have to abide by some ancient writings that they may or may not feel holds credence? I have heard the argument that gay marriage would destroy the “sanctity” of marriage, but the fact is that the United States has some of the highest divorce rates in the world. Allowing homosexual couples to get married would surely decrease the divorce rates in the United States because it really cannot get any worse than it is now.
                I personally think that the constitution has become outdated and many changes are needed in order to progress as a society. The law of the constitution is ancient and the world is a very different place than it was in the days that it was written. Religion still has too much influence on our government; I believe that past many of the problems we face in America today are caused by this issue. The word “equality” is not mentioned a single time in the constitution, this personally has been a shock to me because most Americans are taught to believe that in this country, everyone is equal. While citizens do have equal protection under the law, the discrimination factor is never addressed. The issues regarding religion and the law are a complicated subject to most people, but it is time for the religion to stay out of American policies.



Works Cited

Clark, Jessica A. "Beyond Equality? Against the Universal Turn in Workplace Protections.            Indiana Law Journal 86.4 (2011): 1219-287. Academic Search Complete. Web.
Flanders, Laura. "Demanding Women." Nation 18 Feb. 2013: 20-22. Academic Search      Complete. Web.
 

Saturday, May 18, 2013

Formal Paper #2 rough draft



Christopher Avalos
Professor Knapp
English 1A
18 May 2013
            Since the beginning of its founding, The United States of America (USA) has been proud to call itself a nation in which the state is separated from the church. The truth is that while many people believe it is a part of our constitution, the Bill Of Rights in fact, only guarantees that citizens have the freedom to practice whichever religion they choose for themselves (or what is chosen for them by parents, community, etc.) I know from firsthand experience that in every public school, children are taught to believe this idea. As a result, most adults believe this is true; however, the fact of the matter is that America is far from implementing these ideals. If I could change anything about today’s society, it would be to abolish all religious institutions’ influence on politics in the United States.
The fact that any form of discrimination can be ‘justified’ by a mere speculation has dumbfounded me. Yes, it may be hard to believe for someone who constantly discriminates others, but the truth is that no person has any more rights than the next. While it is true that some people do have more opportunity (when socioeconomic status is taken into account, unfortunately), it is my philosophy that everyone has natural rights as well as societal rights.
            As many people know, a very common form of discrimination in the world is sexism. This is no surprise, since the beginning of time women have never been thought of as equal counterparts to men. “Unto the woman he said, I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee.” (Bible, Genesis 3:16). If there were any further need to explain this, it would be wise to note that this is an obvious degradation to women, portraying them as nothing more than childbearing beings. While I blame no one for practicing their religion, I must say that not everyone has those same beliefs. Not every woman in the United States wants to be a homemaker with children running around all over the place. It is not fair that women working the same job for the same hours are being paid, on average, only 75% of what men are paid.
            The community of homosexuals in our nation is a thriving community. They are human beings just like everyone else and a preference does not make them deserve any less rights than the rest of us. I often hear people argue that their religion does not agree with the choices a homosexual might make. It simply does not make sense that one person’s beliefs would have the right to constitute what someone else’s personal choices might be. Why would someone have to abide by some ancient writings that they may or may not feel holds credence?
           
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Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Change




If I could change anything about our society, it would definitely have to be the way people tend to believe that anyone has more or less rights than the person standing beside them. We are all humans born onto this planet, everyone deserves the same rights. People are so blinded by their beliefs that they forget what it really means to be a human. No one deserves any lesser treatment because of their gender, racial background, religion, or sexuality. People need to realize that discrimination is what’s holding our society behind. It really irritates me when I hear people use their religious beliefs as excuses to back up their discrimination. There are billions of people in the world and there’s no way anyone should expect everyone else to abide by the rules of a single religion. No one is born “better” than anyone else. We are just one race of human beings living together on planet Earth and we need to start behaving in that manner.